9月17日雅思大作文真题

In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

There is a phenomenon happening in some countries where citizens tend to go to large markets that are located out of town instead of going to shop in small-town centre shops. And this phenomenon leads to the small market going broke and increasing the production of cars because the public would like to go with cars. I think this phenomenon obtains more drawbacks rather than benefits.

Firstly, increasing the number of cars is followed by gaining the consumption of oil. As a result, the oil industry will expand significantly in the future. Even though many people do not notice the drawbacks and tend to fulfil their needs and wishes, the enormous negative effects will happen in the near future. For instance, the small town near the capital city of the West area cannot develop properly because citizens prefer to fulfil their needs in the metropolis.

Secondly, the facilities of a small town will not be developed and impact the income of the city. It is because they cannot maximise their local production. Moreover, both the city and citizens cannot be independent and will rely on the other city. To illustrate, the way to get out of this problem is for the local government to gain the quality of local stores and provide convenient access to the public as much as possible. Communities will prefer to go shopping in the town if it can be followed with good facilities and raw material availability.

To conclude, in my opinion, it is obvious that there are plenty of disadvantages rather than advantages when citizens depend on another town. Besides, it can be followed by other crucial problems.

在一些国家发生了一种现象，公民倾向于去位于城外的大型市场，而不是去小城镇中心的商店购物。而这种现象导致小市场破产，增加了汽车的生产，因为公众愿意去买汽车。我认为这种现象获得更多的弊端而不是好处。

首先，增加汽车数量的同时也会增加石油的消耗。因此，石油工业将在未来大幅扩张。尽管许多人没有注意到这些缺点，而是倾向于满足他们的需求和愿望，但巨大的负面影响将在不久的将来发生。例如，西部地区首都附近的小城镇无法正常发展，因为市民更愿意在大都市满足他们的需求。

其次，小城镇的设施不会得到发展，影响城市的收入。这是因为他们不能最大限度地提高当地的生产。此外，城市和市民都不能独立，将依赖其他城市。为了说明，摆脱这个问题的方法，当地政府必须保障当地商店的质量，并尽可能为公众提供方便。如果能有好的设施和原材料供应，社区会更愿意去镇上购物。

最后，在我看来，当市民依赖另一个城镇时，显然有很多缺点而不是优点。此外，它还会带来其他关键问题。